Word count: 178
Concrit?: yes, please.
Author's Notes: My first time posting here. Also, this fic is in script format, I hope that's okay. If it isn't, well, I'll remove it.
INT LIVING ROOM - DAY
JAEJOONG sits on the love seat, poring over a fashion magazine. The doorbell rings.
Fifteen minutes late. Again.
He returns to the magazine. The doorbell rings again. He sighs, before getting up and opening the door.YUNHO scrambles into the warm room.
Fuck, it's really cold outside. What took you so long?
What took you so long?
INT BEDROOM - NIGHT
Yunho kisses Jaejoong. Both their shirts are off. Jaejoong breaks the kiss and gives Yunho a breathtaking smile.
A FEW SECONDS OF BLACK, BEFORE...
INT BEDROOM- NEXT MORNING
Jaejoong is all alone on the bed with a note in his hand. CLOSE ON the NOTE, which has disorderly handwriting- Yunho’s: Meeting to attend. See you tonight.
He crumples up the note and throws it away.
INT BEDROOM- LATER
Jaejoong is smoking a cigarette. CLOSE ON his FACE, we notice that he is blankly staring at the wall.
We hear a strangled sob.