Kim (iluvmatsujun) wrote in dbsk_flashfic,
Kim
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STUCK (FLASHFIC CHALLENGE 68: I LEFT THIS MORNING)

Title: Stuck
Author: iluvmatsujun
Word count: 178
Concrit?: yes, please.
Pairing: YunJae
Author's Notes: My first time posting here. Also, this fic is in script format, I hope that's okay. If it isn't, well, I'll remove it.








INT LIVING ROOM - DAY         






JAEJOONG sits on the love seat, poring over a fashion magazine.  The doorbell rings.









            JAEJOONG


  Fifteen minutes late. Again.




He returns to the magazine. The doorbell rings again. He sighs, before getting up and opening the door.YUNHO scrambles into the warm room.







             YUNHO
                Fuck, it's really cold outside. What took you so long?


            JAEJOONG
                What took you so long?






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INT BEDROOM - NIGHT
      
Yunho kisses Jaejoong. Both their shirts are off. Jaejoong breaks the kiss and gives Yunho a breathtaking smile.







FADE OUT:



        A FEW SECONDS OF BLACK, BEFORE...    



FADE IN:







INT BEDROOM- NEXT MORNING



           Jaejoong is all alone on the bed with a note in his hand. CLOSE ON the NOTE, which has disorderly handwriting- Yunho’s: Meeting to attend. See you tonight.
           He crumples up the note and throws it away.





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INT BEDROOM- LATER



Jaejoong is smoking a cigarette. CLOSE ON his FACE, we notice that he is blankly staring at the wall.







FADE OUT



             We hear a strangled sob.       







THE END





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